"How cold your body can be"

I've been a huge fan of the Anniversary since 11th grade, and the lack of tabs on the internet makes me sad. I've tabbed this song out because my brother is starting to learn guitar and really wants to learn this song. If anybody is familiar with guitar, the Anniversary, this song, or anything else that could help me get this right, please post a comment or contact me with any corrections. I will add the disclaimer that this is my first tab - although I did tab a Bright Eyes song, "Everything Must Belong Somewhere," with few descrepencies to a version I found online.

Edit: Apparently the alignment was basically destroyed when I posted this. For a properly aligned version look here.

Edit: I've recorded enough of my tab to form a comparison, listen to it and compare it with the original and let me know what you think. ( I recorded my version with a computer mic which is part of a pair of headphones. In other words, sorry about my breathing but the mic was right next to my face. )

The Anniversary
"Sweet Marie" Chords
Standard Tuning

C - 032010
E - 022100
E7 - 020100
E7* - 022130
F - 133211
Am - 002210
Asus2 - 000220
Dm - 000231

Verse I

C E7 F C
Sweet Marie, there's a hole where your heart should be
C E7 F C
And on the hill she's begging for a harmony
C E7 F C
Sweet Marie, there's a hole where your heart should be
C E7 F C
And on the hill she's begging for a harmony
C E7 F C
What beautiful lies you've been told
C E7 F C
What terrible truths drown your soul

Chorus

E F C Am Asus2 Am
She hides behind all my lies
Dm E7* Am Asus2 Am
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* Am Asus2 Am
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* F C F
Oh you need all my love tonight - all my love

Verse II

C E7 F C
Sweet Marie, how cold your body can be
C E7 F C
And on the hill she's begging for a harmony
C E7 F C
Such a beautiful kiss in the face of fear
C E7 F C
Such a beautiful song burns through your ears

Chorus

E F C Am Asus2
She hides behind all my lies
Dm E7* Am Asus2
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* Am Asus2
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* F C F
Oh you need all my love tonight - all my love

Solo

C E7 F C
C E7 F C
C E7 F C
C E7 F C

Bridge

Dm E7* Am Asus2
Dm E7* F C F

Chorus

Dm E7* Am Asus2
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* Am Asus2
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* Am Asus2
Oh you need to be loved
Dm E7* Am
Oh you need...